Thursday, 7 May 2015



I can see the Snowfakes falling down to the ground as the sunrise
I can see Children making Snowman and sliding on the Ice
I walk around on the soft muddy walking track, watching people skiing
I see the Children throw Snowballs at each other with fun

Rhyme- I used Rhyme in my poem because I think it would go good with my winter poem
Simile- I used Simlie because Children love winter so much
Alliteration- I used Alliteration because it is putting 3 F's in a sentence eg: Funny, Funkey, Fantastie wabbly children on the Ice.

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